Developing Assignment 4, seated figure: Final drawing

Despite the problems I still had, I felt ready to tackle the assignment. My first step was to provide me with an image that I could use for the main proportions, because I had so many difficulties getting them right from the computer screen or with the printouts I had made so far.

I prepared my slightly modified section of the original photo as a poster print, on 4 A4 sheets, and glued these together to have my original in A2. Thus I had a fairly large image to use for the composition and outline of the figure.

Step 1: Pencil drawing

P1060234I began with a pencil sketch of the figure on the sheet and tried to get perspective and proportions right, at the same time I tried to fill the entire format. When I felt the drawing was about right, I proceeded to detail work. I moved the easel towards the computer and used enlarged sections of the photo on the computer screen to help me with details.

I chose smooth, medium weight white paper to permit overworking with felt pen or ink. The paper was not appropriate for washes, so this determined my possible choices of media for this drawing. I had markers in mind but wanted to see how the drawing developed, then decide.

Step 2: Black fineliner

P1060238When I felt that I had the details sketched, I proceeded to a black fineliner. The pencil underwork was helpful as a guide, but I constantly looked on my photo source to improve the overall impression.

I decided to employ hatching because the lines alone were confusing at some areas, for example the shades on the trousers

Step 3: Markers

P1060241The decision whether or not to use colour markers was very difficult. I really liked the pure black fineliner drawing and was afraid of spoiling it by adding marker. I had already seen that the colours tended to cover up the linework and I did not want to loose focus on the line for this drawing. I made a pause and after looking at my earlier marker sketch I decided to take a risk and just try.

But looking at the result, I found that the black lines needed reinforcement.

Step 4: Soft tip felt pen

P1060243I worked over the fine lines that were already there. I tried to use the bolder lines as accents and left the finer lines for more delicate elements.

Step 5 – Final drawing: Colorized background bands

Re-reading my reflections on the studies I made for the assignments, I realized that I had left out the dark metal band which was behind the chair, and which was a very dominant dark area in the original photo source. I decided that I wanted to include this effect into my drawing. I chose the medium gray for the top band and dark brown for the metal band, then added a gray layer on the brown band to dampen the colour a bit.

Somehow I feel that this was the completion step for the drawing, which gave a background and orientation in space to the figure on the chair

Overall I’m quite satisfied with the result. It reminds me of a comic drawing in its bold style. I also like how it captures my morning coffee setting. The real morning coffee is a relaxed situation, but the drawing incorporates something beyond that – my tension, my skepticism, my determination, but also all the questions that are running through my mind.

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Developing Assignment 4, seated figure: More studies

I was very enthused after the first set of studies, but the next set went less well. I was struggling a lot with proportions and details and somehow nothing seemed to work. I was questioning everything and seemed to be running against that old wall. The studies aren’t particularly successful but I’ll include them anyway because they’re steps towards the final drawing. I consoled myself with the idea that difficult days are often the most fruitful, with hindsight.

14) Face study, pencil in A4 sketchbook (15 October)

P1060248Aims: try to achieve more resemblance by studying details, focus on line

Result: Slight improvement over earlier attempts but still not very much resemblance.

Identified problems, possible solutions

– It is very difficult to achieve resemblance when using *only* line because every error is immediately visible. This perception of error is probably a result of human’s highly developed face recognition capacities.

– My photo source is a difficult because my eyes are half closed, since I was looking towards the sun. Maybe at this point I must go away from detail since the image quality does not permit close up – the only thing to be seen are pixels. Will try whether a more generous approach on the face works with the drawing. I think I’d rather try to resolve the difficulty instead of exchanging the photo.

– Drawing the hair is also very difficult using only line. It doesn’t seem to work out.

15) Face study, pen & ink and wash, A4 sketchbook

P1060250Aims: Try whether a division in line work (with pen) and adding tonality (with a wash) works for the face

Result: Tonality was difficult to handle with the dark ink I used. The contrast between lit and shaded areas created a hard line which I don’t like. But overall resemblance seems to gradually improve.

Problems and Solutions: The sketchbook paper buckles when I use washes… better switch to heavier paper when using wet media. I have that available on pad.

16) Hand study, pencil in A4 sketchbook (15 October)

P1060252Aims: Get to grips with finger positions of the relaxed hand

Result: I’m afraid I ran against the limits of using photographs. I can’t close up the picture because it gets pixelated. This seems to be a general problem because it keeps reappearing whenever I intend to make detail studies.

Open issues

To practice hands, face and other details I think I must find a better solution than enlarging the main picture on screen. But I can’t add up detail photos now because they wouldn’t exactly correspond to the positions in the main photo. I think I must postpone resolution of this issue to a later time.

Maybe when I’m doing the pictures for the second drawing, I can supplement the main photo with detail photos of the difficult areas and this will permit close-up studies. But the problem is that I have to get up and trigger the self-shot mechanism of the camera after each photograph, so each photo tends to be different. The approach might work when having a model which holds position until all photos are made. So probably the better way to go would be to practice drawing objects like hands, face, folds from the real world and then memory of how things should be can supplement drawings from photograph.

I realize that I need more practice and more detail studies, but this requires a larger time frame than available for this assignment. I think I will do my best for now and try experiment with media as well.

17) Figure, quick experimental sketch in pen & ink (umbra and indigo), 24×32 watercolour paper

P1060253Aims: Try out pen & ink with washes in a different colour combination. Test the effect of a dark wash for the unlit areas

Result:

– Overall proportions and details of the figure are not well executed.
– The dark wash for the metal band behind the chair works for me. It also works on the hair. Not sure whether the approach is in line with the central idea of this task, to focus on line.
– The colour selection doesn’t convince me, I found the blister/yellow combination more interesting.
– The composition works for me. The size of the figure on the paper is good and the context I included creates a bit of space but doesn’t divert attention
– This drawing looks a bit cluttered, compared to my detail studies. I guess this comes because I tried to include too much detail for the small scale (A4 sketchbook.

Open issues

I seem to have problems with drawing the entire figure. I tend to feel overwhelmed very easily, it is apparent in this study. While I have pleasure drawing just sections, I’m not comfortable with drawing the whole. I need a technique how I can “divide and conquer”. I thought that making an overall sketch to get the proportions right, then drawing in details would work, but somehow I don’t get proportions right when I don’t look at the details to guide me. Maybe the “simple shapes” approach is a technique that helps to overcome the problem. I could try to get proportions right using the complete photo, but only look at simple shapes, then enlarge my photo on screen and work out the details.

This may not be my day for detail work, I have been impatient all the time and that’s not the right attitude for this kind of task. But the idea of a dark wash over the unlit area itself seems to work in exactly the way I wanted. It is particularly the dark metal band behind the chair for which I searched a solution. Will have to try out whether I should leave that white and “invent” those lines of the chair which cannot be seen, or whether I tint the area dark over the invented lines, which would be closer to accurate representation.

18)      Complete figure, pencil in A4 sketchbook

P1060267Another try to get proportions about right.

 

19)      Folds of cloth on the belly, black felt pen in A4 sketchbook

P1060258Aims: Study the folds, experiment with media. What will work for bold lines in A2 size?

Result: This was done with a fineliner, then worked over with a big soft felt pen, because I wanted to try out whether bold lines of different thickness worked better than hatching with the fineliner.

Open issues

I like the drawing but am not sure about both hatching and thick lines for the final drawing. I think it is extremely difficult to use only line for the folds and so far I think this did not work very well in my studies. But adding a little colour greatly improves the understandability.

I’m not sure whether I want to use pen and ink on A2 size. Somehow I don’t feel comfortable with the idea. To me, pen and ink fits better with a smaller size of paper, like A4 or A3. Not sure which medium I like for the larger size. This motivated my experiment with the big felt pen, because it would work for the large format. I could use it to vary line thickness. But I wouldn’t want to use it for hatching to indicate tone, the lines are too bold.

20) Complete figure, black pen over pencil, A2

P1060269Aim: To get proportions right in large scale

Result: I termed the drawing “big-headed woman”, because the head is much too large compared to the rest. Pun intended. I won’t finish the drawing because the proportions look too ridiculous. Go back to the basics. Any technique to develop skill with proportions? My earlier more successful attempts seem to have been sheer luck. On a more positive side: I’m beginning to take risks.

 

21) Complete figure, 9B graphite and 4B pencil, newsprint 45 x61 cm

P1060271Aim: Improve on proportions

Result: The drawing developed nicely and I felt that I got the figure right on the chair, but then I began working on the face and tried to make the drawing more solid, and this introduced errors. In the end, this drawing got out of control. The upper body too dominant and the face too small. Despite these errors, the composition as such and the space the figure takes on the paper are well done, it fills the format.

 

22)   Complete figure, HB pencil on A2 paper (15 October)

P1060274Aim: Improve on proportions

Result: Same as the drawings before, I’m fine with developing a broad outline but when I begin to make it solid, the errors become apparent. But the overall proportions are better in this drawing than in the two large studies before.

I chose the heavier smooth white paper with the idea of practicing a technique to build up the final drawing from a proportional study. I thought that once I have the proportions right, I can use darker colour for definite lines and details. Maybe I’ll try this out tomorrow. But it is possible that I’d better stay with pencil until I have found the definite lines.

 

Reflections: Where am I now?

I made several studies and I have a rough idea of what I want. I’m still having problems with proportions but there seems to be slight progress. I could use some more experimentation with media because I’m still undecided between black pen and marker or pen & ink with washes, or maybe do something completely different. So far I like my pen and ink studies best but I don’t feel comfortable with it for the large format.

I’m also not very comfortable with the entire project of “detailed observation” to demonstrate skill in depicting details. I prefer a more generous approach and sometimes it feels like a real chore to do so much detail work. But actually this is more a problem of scale, because I thoroughly enjoyed my detail studies in A4 format. It may also have to do with my deteriorating eyesight, since I have real trouble with visual details. For example, when there’s a number with several zeros, not grouped by spaces, I literally can’t tell how many zeros there are because my eyes cannot focus. I have to use fingers and cover them 2 by 2, then count.

The eye problems make observing details for drawing really difficult. Using glasses improves sight, but imposes a different kind of problem. For example, when I use my distance glasses, the view on distant objects is improved, but everything close, including the drawing pad before me, is blurred because my eyes don’t adapt in a way they could when I was younger.

I need to find ways how I can cope with this problem. I considered employing a technique that was introduced quite early in the course: enlarging an image. I did not like it… it may be the way to go to arrive at correct representation. But I really don’t like this kind of work because it’s a purely technical approach. I’m very dissatisfied with my options at the moment. And time is running away.

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Developing Assignment 4, seated figure: First studies

I made a series of preparatory studies over a few days.

1) Compositional sketch of complete scene, black pen in A4 sketchbook (9 October)

P1060206– The section of the original image works very well for me
– Would leave out the second chair, but am not sure about it. Might convey more intensely the idea of “no partner, but a cat” which I readin the original photo
– Lowered the cloth of the umbrella for compositional reasons

Thought about making sketches of t~t select to verify whether the one I chose works indeed best. Would correspond to making several sketches of a model to find out the best view. But I have made my decision and am quite sure that I want to draw this view and none of the others. Would rather get back if I get stuck. It’s also a matter of economic treatment of the time I have available. If I were unsure, I’d certainly try out different photos. But I feel that I have done this process already when I analyzed the photographs and made my choice.

Next step: Selecting the media to use. Might need some more experimentation! Considering some alternatives:

– Coloured pencil: would work nicelz to build up tonal values. But here it’s about line, so probably not the best choice
– Coloured felt pen: to make coloured lines? Might look a bit childish and appropriate for lighter tones.
I realiye that there’s also a decision about colour and tone to make. But I think the task implies a line drawing, maybe with hatching to indicate what is in front and what is behind.
– I like black pen. I used it for the first sketch. But it doesn’t permit corrections. I tend to not like overdrawn erroneous lines.
– Pencil to permit erasing or gradually develop the correct line?
– I’d also like to use lines of different thickness because I realized that I can indicate three-dimensionality with that and it’s also nice for fine details like traits of the face.

I think I’ll start with some studies of selected elements in pencil to learn about the forms. Then later decide upon the media.

More studies

Was again at odds with instructions because am finding it difficult to focus on line and leave out tonality and colour because for me line is not important, but tonality and colour are. Makes me feel uncomfortable to work solely with line. Switched to working off the computer screen because it was more flexible for enlarging what I wanted to study.

2) Pencil sketch of face and cat: 2B pencil in A4 sketchbook, focus on line (9 October)

3) Upper body and cat, Soft felt pen in A4 sketchbook. (9 October)

The idea was to make lines of different width. Worked over initial sketch in pencil. Pencil outline helped to overcome fear of making bold marks at the wrong place. Second go with felt pen was accompanied by much analztical thinking

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4) Complete scene, A3 Study in 4B Pencil (10 October)

P1060213Aim: Study proportions, try to find the final lines from tentative light lines, prepare switch to larger format

Problems and solutions

– 4B pencil too soft – tentative lines became too dark. Will switch to harder pencil
– Proportions not correct. Prefer to do another study instead of rubbing over and correcting. Idea of construction the drawing as if it was an architectural sketch.
– Photograph is too dark in many areas, for example the entire left part of the figure – can’t see cloth details and folds. Might try whether I can increase brightness of the picture I use as basis. Would like to stay with the picture because it has an atmoshphere to it that I found worthwhile capturing.

Impact:  Began developing ideas for the final drawing. Discovered the different nature of the linear elements in the picture, for example the rough shadow contours of the square terrace stones. Had the idea to lay out broad coloured washes to indicate terrace wall, floor, houses in background and umbrella in plain colour and overlay with a linear drawing.

Open issues

–  Feeling that the instruction to focus on line hinders me to draw naturally and instinctively. Inner perturbation results in distortions and quick exhaustion while drawing. Don’t know what to do about this. Might try to leave instructions aside for a moment and see if I get along better just drawing like I want to. But this causes again inner conflict because it means ignoring the authoritative nature of the instructions. This seems to describe the core of my problem with this course. But I want to develop skills, so must find a solution that works for me.

– Some decisions required what to include and what to leave out in the drawing. Have a tendency to leave out the black fence because it is so dominant and the drawing looks much softer and peaceful without. Another question is how much detail of the background buildings to include. I’d like to leave them in because they have a meaning in the drawing (inside my terrace – outside are the buildings, I’m protected in here), but want them to optically recede, not dominate. On the other hand – this assignment is about figure drawing. Might be better to focus on the person and make it larger. Having just the cat and my coffee and my dreamy view into the morning sun for central theme.

– Instruction to do studies in the sketchbook and the need to make the final drawing in at least A2 side does not take into account the difference between drawing at different scale. I think I’ll need to do studies in the larger scale as well. On the other hand, selecting a detail and drawing this in A4 is already an enlargement that might fit with the final drawing scale. Will observe how the different paper sizes work for me.

5) Figure on chair without props, 2H pencil study in A4 skechbook (10 October 13)

P1060215Aim: Improve proportions of the figure, try constructing the chair and the figure in perspective, focus on line to create dimensionality

Problems and solutions

– Details of feet and face less successful – needs extra study
– Some problems with placing the chair correctly in perspective. Looks ok in the drawing, but isn’t correct compared to the photograph. May not be an issue.

Impact: Slight improvement over previous study in proportions. Line works well on the upper part of the body and on the chair. Realized that pencil lines permit tonal variations. This can be used to emphasize or de-emphasize elements of the drawing.

Open issues: Would like to experiment with different media, on the other hand do not want to work over this study and definitely need more practice with the pencil. Might develop both in parallel

6) Face study, A4 sketchbook, soft felt pen over HB pencil (13 October)

P1060216Aim: To try out purely linear drawing based on tentative study with pencil, achieve more resemblance with the person

Result: Indeed more resemblance than earlier attempts, lines still a bit messy/insecure

 

7) Compositional sketch I: figure and props, large format (45×61 cm), charcoal on newsprint (13 October)

Aim: To try out whether the image idea works on large scale. Assess the effect of the black metal fence in the background

Result: The figure appears well in context, but I’m unsure whether that’s appropriate to the task because the image is composed of 50% context and 50% figure which may be too much emphasis on the context.

8) Compositional sketch II: figure only, large format (45 x 61 cm), charcoal on newsprint (13 October)

Aim: To test whether the figure can be successfully become the dominant image element, which means enlarging the figure and leaving out context

Result: I think this works much better compositionally! It’ll permit to enlarge details of the figure. Not sure if the lack of context doesn’t strip away part of the atmosphere and meaning I wanted to convey. It’s a clear tradeoff. But I think the core of the task is to focus on the figure, not on context details.

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9) Figure only, line study in pencil on paper, A2 format (14 October)

P1060222Aim: To work on proportions and perspective in large scale, trying to focus on line

Result: Real improvement on proportions. Detail study of face shows effect, but face still needs improvement to resemble me more. Need some detail study of face, ear, hands and feet.

Open issues:

– Whether or not to include cat, houses in the background, pottery and other props. If not, the figure could be drawn larger on the paper
– Which technique to choose for the final drawing. Had several ideas, but feel that I definitely need pencil practice, *because* it is so unforgiving.
– How to indicate shadows. Closely related to choice of medium. What I’d like to do would be a drawing of pen and ink with washes – dark tones in the deep shadows and very transparent for the rest. Problem is that ink permits no corrections at all, and the question whether the idea fits into the task description to “focus on line”. Might make some experiments and just try out how it looks and whether it might work for the final drawing.

10) Study of the feet, pen & ink and marker (blue and brown), A4 sketchbook (14 October)

P1060225Aim: to experiment with techniques for the final drawing, take a closer look at details (chose feet for this studz)

Result: Employed sort of bottom-up approach to proportions, using negative space and relative sizes of adjacent elements to get dimensions and orientation correctly. Drawing only a section of the whole was less intimidating with the uncorrectable pen and ink. I like the pen & ink technique for this motif. I chose a blister (dark brown-green tone) which is softer in contrast than plain black. My sketchy approach creates a very lively and energetic overall impression, and the intense marker colours add to this. Advantage of markers over watercolours is that the paper doesn’t buckle.

Open issues

– Treatment of the dark areas behind the chair. My spontaneous approach would be to tint this area real dark and do no line work at all there, just construction lines to be sure that the wooden chair legs are correct in perspective. Would work in a painting, but I don’t know how to solve this in a line-oriented drawing without creating holes in the composition.
– Technique: Not sure whether I’ll stick with markers for adding colour, not entirely satisfied. Might be too irregular on a larger drawing and get into concurrence with the ink mark. I’d prefer the colour to support the ink in a more subtle way. Might be a question of technique, might look better if applied more evenly. But then again, a different medium might be more appropriate.

11) Study of the hand with mug, Pen & ink with wax crayons, A4 sketchbook (14 October)

P1060227Aims: Closer look at the left hand with the mug to understand details, experiment with media

Result: The intermediate phase without colour, line only, was interesting in itself. It worked well for the hand, less well for the folds of the cloth. Proportions in the section are fine. Experimented with watersoluble wax crayons but applied them dry. Without water they tend to remain light unless applied as a thick layer. I like the effect, but it’s not really what I was looking for.

Open issues
– Still not satisfied with choice of media, need more experimentation
– More studies of detail warranted, this seems to help me concentrate and obtain better results.

12) Study of the relaxed hand, Pen & ink with wash, blister and yellow, 32 x 24 cm (14 October)

P1060229Aims: Studying the details of the other hand, experiment with ink washes

Result: It is an unusual colour combination which I find quite interesting. I like the technique, but I think how I applied it here wasn’t appropriate to the focus of the task: line work. I had begun painting the folds, rather than indicating them with line. Need more experiments and more detail studies

Open issues
– The folds on the belly and the jeans need closer study.
– The hand needs still more study. Problem is that I can’t enlarge my photo any further because it becomes pixelated. Maybe try again in pencil until I’ve understood the structure. Makes me more aware why anatomy is indeed helpful for drawings (what I tended to neglect).

13) Details of folds on belly, 9B Graphite pen, A4 sketchbook (14 October)

P1060246Aims: Study the folds on the belly

Result: Developed into a tonal study. Not directly addressing the task, but I let myself go because I felt comfortable with what I was doing.

Open issues: Still not sure how I can appropriately depict the folds on the belly using only line

 

 

Some reflections on my process

– I made real progress! I think proportions are getting more accurate overall, and the depiction of details in hand and feet as well. Of course I need more practice, but I’m really happy that for the first time I see that I’m actually developing some skills.

– I developed a technique to keep track of what I wanted, what I achieved and how I might further improve: Aims of a study, result and open issues. It might be much to read but writing these sections really helps me to focus on how I might build on the preparatory studies and develop topic and technique towards the final drawing.

– I also think that I’m addressing the issue my tutor brought up in feedback on assignment 3. She found that my studies led to nowhere, they were incohesive. This time I’m trying to tackle the problems I see, with a clear focus on progressing towards the final drawing! Very glad that I made this step forward.

 

 

 

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Card players

I wanted to overcome the problem of limited access to groups of people which I might draw by searching for photos on the web, then drawing from a photo. I had a spontaneous idea to search for “card players”, and was surprised that practically nothing else but paintings came up.

The one I immediately recognized was the painting by Paul Cézanne realized c. 1893-96, which I had studied some time ago for the watercolour course. There were also more frivolous interpretations of the topic, for example this painting (undated) by Hayley Tolkin, a female contemporary painter from South Africa.

Paul Cézanne The-Card-Players-large Hayle Tolkin card_players

Here’s one of the few drawings I found with the search term “card players 2013” – hoping that this would yield photos I might use for the original idea. It is available in a very good quality which permits looking at details. It’s nice to see how sensitive the pencil lines were made. This is something I would like to develop for myself as well, and one of the reasons I so often use just pencil. Only that I haven’t really focused on the medium because I was too busy depicting something, and usually in a hurry because I’m so restricted timewise.

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But at this point I had realized that I had stumbled across an interesting motif, which has inspired quite a few artists! So I thought I’d summarize it into a little essay before getting on with my search for a photo source, and selected a  medieval interpretation by David the younger Teniers and a more modern interpretation, which looks like 1920’s expressionism, by African painter Hale Woodruff (1900-1980). The source indicated it was painted in 1978.

Surprised, I did some follow up research and learnt that this was the replacement version from a badly deteriorated original that had been painted in 1928-29 after Woodruff’s trip to Paris where he was influenced by Pablo Picasso and Paul Cézanne.

David the Younger Teniers - The card players''The Card Players'' by Hale Woodruff

I tried many variations of the search term, but I wasn’t able to find a photograph I could use for my purpose!

Then I tried out whether I could find some royalty free photos in an image bank. But in the end, most of these images were with a watermark, which wasn’t what I needed. Often, the pictures were very polished and stylized, with soap-opera style people, and this didn’t appeal to me.

I found a nice historic photograph of a group of men playing Faro, another card game, picture taken 1895 in Arizona. But upon closer look, the picture did not have much detail of the cloth, for example folds, and I found it technically too difficult to use as a source because it was a bit blurry.

unknown photographer 1895 Faro_card_game

In growing exasperation, I began searching for “Arizona card players”, which yielded pictures of American football player teams in full equipment, colours red and white. I tried “French card players” (many Cezanne paintings), “German card players” (Shepherd’s dogs, caricatures, some Nazi emblems), and “British card players”.

This final option did not find card players, but a nice photograph of two gentlemen drinking a beer while talking, presumably an interview situation. Indeed, it was Kevin Maguire interviewing Nigel Farage, a UK political figure. I liked the picture but then was put off by the possible political connotations, which I did not want to have in my sketchbook of moving people.

After all, I’m a bit disheartened whether the photograph idea will get me any further. I might search for pictures of people in general and take what I happen to come across, but card players seem to be too rare. It’s so difficult to get on with this task of depicting people!

Mirror reporter Kevin Mcguire meets with UKIP leader Nigel Farage

Sources

Paul Cézanne, Card players http://www.paul-cezanne.org/The-Card-Players.html

Haley Tolkin, card players http://www.hayleytolkin.com/images/large/card_players.jpg

David the Younger Teniers, Card players http://www.wikigallery.org/wiki/painting_161660/David-The-Younger-Teniers/The-Card-Players

Anonymous drawing, Card players http://ekocentric.deviantart.com/art/Card-Players-Varric-and-Fenris-382581541

Hale Woodruff, Card Players http://12.13.176.164/museum/press/profit-woodruff-images/%27%27The%20Card%20Players%27%27%20by%20Hale%20Woodruff.jpg

Wikipedia, Arizona Faro Card players http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Faro_card_game.jpg

UK Mirror, Kevin Maguire interview photograph http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/kevin-maguire-ukip-playing-the-race-1548746

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Response to tutor report #3: Problems and solutions

I’m determined to improve… so I thought it would be a good idea to make myself a list of problems identified in the tutor report, and note down how I will respond or may have already responded.

Somehow I’m already less negative about my drawings skills because when I compare my work for part 4 to that for part 3, I see there’s development. Maybe it just took some time to warm up again after the pause of almost a year. I also think that I am in the process of developing “good working habits” and feel that I get better organized and a bit more independent in decision making, concerning paper choice, size, media. These may be only small steps but I think they are into the right direction.

Having digested the initial frustration about the assessment of part 3, I’ll include a brief summary of the main critique points as a reminder for myself. Then in the time to come will try to incorporate the really helpful suggestions into what I’m doing. I don’t know, maybe I’ve already digested much more than I consciously know. For example, I realize that my way of looking has changed. When I sit in the bus, I observe people as if I wanted to draw them, look at he folds in their clothing, notice the reflecting light on metal bars. When I walk through the streets, I’m looking as if I had my sketchbook with me and wanted to do quick studies on everything. It’s a bit strange! But I guess that’s part of the process that this course aims to get going in students.

Problems identified in tutor report on assignment 3

Overall Comments: Not much development from initial studies to a final piece – no refinement or improved execution

Project 1 (Drawing outdoors): Making many studies is fine, but they should show development

Problems:
– unskilled use of media
– repetitive because there’s no development

Suggestions:
– use different media in a variety of ways
– try to capture an atmosphere
– practice of formal elements: textures, tones, colours, composition
– review the work and search for ways to improve

Project 2 (Perspective)

– Not enough evidence of skills when dealing with perspective
– the two drawings lack colour, scene, and a personal voice

Project 3 (Townscapes)

– Some drawings with potential, but they need refinement

Project 4 (Drawing trees)

– One study with potential, could have been further developed in follow-up drawings

Assignment 3 (View out of the window)

– Preliminary studies look rushed
– Final drawing has many weaknesses in fundamentals: unsufficient consideration of linear elements, use of media to create tone, lack of mood of a scene

Sketchbooks/Learning logs

– reflective but no awareness how improvement might be possible

Suggestions
– try and have more confidence
– look at other OCA student’s work and their solutions to similar problems
– read the grading criteria

 

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What else

Today I was outside for a walk in the evening, it was already dark. I came by a tree that was entirely glowing in red light before the background of high-rise office buildings and the dark, cloudy sky. It looked wonderful and I took some pictures with the camera of my mobile phone.

Red tree at night

IMG052The motif has surrealist qualities to it. I immediately thought I’d like to make a drawing out of it, using the photo as a source. The camera captured less than what I could see, but the pictures will help to develop my idea for the drawing. I thought about the classroom technique of making scratch drawings over coloured layers in wax crayons.

At first, one layer of colourful wax is made on a sheet of paper, which is then covered by a second layer in all black. Then a sharp instrument is taken to scratch in marks, and thus the colourful underwork is revealed against the black background. This is a technique that might work for this project.

Another idea was to first paint in red watercolour the tree shape, then apply a resist with a fine brush, and then cover with a dark colour. After everything has dried, remove the resist and this will then reveal the reddish tree shape before the dark background.

I’m developing ideas for a drawing relating to the outdoor drawing part of this course. I want to revise that part and make more drawings that correspond to the various exercises. This one would relate to tree studies, and it might trigger some experimentation with drawing media.

Two ladies on a bench

P1060165Then turning around the corner, I made a brief break for the daily drawing into my “Moving People” sketchbook. So far there are only line figures in it which look rather quirky. The problem was that I was not able to capture anything else than that when people walked so quickly before me. But today I was at a different place and managed to make a quick sketch of two ladies sitting on a bench. I like this sketch, it looks very mature and it’s an extreme contrast to the earlier scribblings in that sketchbook.

I thought about drawing people from web images or photographs to give myself the opportunity for observation. But I definitely prefer to draw something real, not from a photograph.

Hopperian subway scene

IMG043Then later when I transferred the photos from the mobile phone to my computer I discovered an early picture I had made. I was very impressed because now I read this as a Hopper scenario moved to the 21st century. I made the picture before having been to the Hopper exhibition. It was a very unspectacular moment. I was waiting for the subway to come and just looked towards the opposite side of the station, where some other people were waiting.

The scene there looked so very characteristic for the subway setting that I thought to just take a picture. Looking at it now, about a month or two later, I find it almost fundamental and with inner weight. It looks just so similar to Hopper’s scenarios, with its strong contrast between light around the figures and darkness over the rails.

The three lost persons waiting for the next train to come. It’s like one of Hopper’s New York settings, only 70 years later. This would be a nice motif for a drawing as well, and it might fit into the figure project. I intensely admired Hopper’s way of making strong contrasts between lit and unlit areas in his drawings. This photo would be a good source for a drawing in Hopper’s style.

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Assignment 3: Student response to tutor report

Reading the tutor report confirmed what I had expected about the reception of my work in part 3. I’m glad that those few drawings which I found better had indeed passed the test, but for the rest, honestly, I’m devastated. It’s really a question of whether this course and I will ever come together for good.

I’m more than willing to work on my skills, but at the same time I often feel so annoyed by the task instructions and I’m so quickly exhausted when drawing, that I don’t know whether I’ll be able to sufficiently improve for passing this course. It seems like I have objections against everything and can’t get my head around it. For example, suggestions to look at other artists immediately invoke my response of: Sure, because I like looking at other artist’s work, but I don’t want to copy anybody’s style, I want to find my own style! So I’d rather not over-emphasize the activity of studying other people’s artwork.

Then the suggestion to look at other OCA students’ artwork. I’d love to, and I’ve done so regularly with the old student site, but now after the switch this is no longer accessible. No-one seems to use the artwort upload on the new site, and the old works are not available. This has been a topic of discussion in the student forums, but the issue has not yet been resolved. I hope that this functionality will soon be available with the old uploads available as well. I always found looking at other students’ work very inspirational.

An important advice in this report is to get back to earlier exercises and projects and improve the work I’ve done there. This is indeed what I intend to do, only that I’m finding it difficult to organize alongside regular coursework. I consider several options. One is to first complete Assignment 4 where I’m currently at, trying to integrate some of the advice and make studies that actually help to develop the final drawing. And then take a break to revise my earlier work, repeat some of the exercises and try to improve my skills. The other idea would be to use part 5 as an extended practice field and just do all the projects, and alongside them review the earlier exercises as I see necessary. And afterwards decide which option I’ll chose for submission.

I had begun thinking which option to choose in part 5 and a preliminary conclusion was that I feel very drawn to the figure option but since I have only myself as a model this is a bit difficult. And since I should developt my mark making and also the ability with tonality, choosing the first option might be a good idea. Conclusion: I’ll complete assignment 4 and then proceed to option one, supported by reviewing the exercises for part one of the course.

Other suggestions in the tutor report

Four artists were suggested for a closer look: Paul Noble, Charlotte Verity, Piet Mondrian, and Leon Kossoff. I already had a brief look at them today, liking some better than others, and finding them all interesting. I think I can make something out of the recommendations. They may also help me to become clearer about the style I’d like to develop for myself.

Suggestion to read the grading criteria: I’ve done so already and felt quite intimidated. I know that my drawings don’t live up to those standards, I understand the standards, but I don’t know how to improve and get there… I don’t think it would  be a good idea to try and copy somebody else’s style. Maybe it’s as simple as that, I need more practice and I must learn to devote sufficient time when I’m drawing. Which is essentially the same as “try harder” and “keep going”.

Something I don’t like about all this online blogging is that writing and preparing images eats up so much time. It’s essentially a repetition of what I’ve thought earlier. I already stated several times that I wanted to draw more and write less, but I don’t succeed! Maybe it’s because I find writing easier than drawing.

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Assignment 3: Tutor report

Overall Comments

Patricia, although you have tried out several of the exercises in this submission, it is not your strongest. There does not seem to be much development from initial sketches which are preliminary and do not lead towards refined or well executed pieces. You have explained your constraints in your blog and although you want to draw what you want, you need to use the course handbook to execute the exercises then add in your own interpretations.

Feedback on assignment

Project 1- There are many sketches which have shown you trying to work out composition and perspective and this is a good way of practicing. However, they do become repetitive as each one does not really lead onto another medium, focus on your strong points or show much development. You needed to try to involve how you could use different media in a variety of ways to capture an atmosphere, feeling of when you were in the space or more practice on the different formal elements such as textures, tones, colours and composition.

The clouds show some colour but the utilisation of the coloured media is not very skilled thus the images of the clouds look rushed and unconvincing. Although you have tried a few attempts, always review your work and see what can be improved.

Project 2- Not many examples of trying to get to grips with perspective. Although you say you have tried it before there still needs to be some evidence that you can do it accurately especially in context of this submission and drawing outdoors. I can see some accuracy in the second drawing but it does not go anywhere. How can you add colour, a scene and your personal voice into what you interpret? How are you seeing the outdoors?

Project 3- Townscapes. Again there seems to be a lot of preliminary drawings where you are trying out composition and perspective but none of them are resolved. You need to go back over them and refine them to make them more finalised (at least the ones you think have potential) with improving them each time. The ‘townscape line study, pencil and pen is the most successful in this series and because you have used another medium other than relying on pencil, there seems to be some potential in this.

Project 4- The larger study of the tree 42x 30cm has potential, as this piece is delicate and sensitive. This could have been done again on a larger scale taking the successful elements of detail and the depiction of the branches and with adding some colour. As a collection, this project shows a little expressionistic approach, which demonstrates a sense of thinking out of the box.

Assignment- There are several studies which show you are trying out different elements to make a successful assignment. However, they do look rushed and the final shows a lack of focus on the fundamentals such as consideration of line on the windows, use of media to create tone and a lack of a mood of a scene. However, depth is considered as a framed composition to draw the viewer in.

Sketchbooks/ Learning Logs/Critical essays

You continue to demonstrate your progression and journey throughout the exercises you have tackled. Your comments show self-criticality and a self-reflection but you have not always been aware of how you could improve but are very aware that you need to improve.

Your comment “I really must find my personal way of doing things without constantly feeling bad about every drawing I make,” is appropriate to this submission but you should try and have more confidence. You have done drawings and sketches but if you look at other students work on the OCA website you can see how they have tackled and overcome the same constraints you have. You must remember that other students are here too thinking the same. The course asks you to draw technically and learn but also part of the assessment is having that personal voice in your work. It would be a very good idea to read the grading criteria in the back of the handbook so you are aware of how your work will be assessed.

Suggested reading/viewing

Paul noble- For personal interpretation of townscapes in pencil.

Charlotte Verity- Trees for fluidity and sense of movement.

Piet Mondrian’s trees- again for the use of manipulation of media.

Leon Kossoff- energy and expressive drawings of his surroundings.

 

Pointers for the next assignment

You have started to look at more artists but there needs to be more investigations into others so you can be influenced in a way of moving forward. Ones that can inspire you and relate to your work so you can see how to progress.

As you have mentioned, after a break you might feel a little rusty getting back on track. This has been the case with your technical ability so be sure to practice different elements you struggle with more.

Work with different media and experiment with their suitability and potentials. Perhaps go back to earlier exercises to loosen yourself up and remind yourself of how they can be used.

Read the grading criteria as mentioned in the above comments.

Go onto the OCA student website and see other students work on the same course (as suggested before.)

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Developing Assignment 4, seated figure: Preparations

The task for this assignment was to make two large drawings, one focusing on line, and the other focusing on tonality. Based on my experience with drawing myself and in view of a definite lack of persons whom I might ask to be my model, I thought I’d approach this task using photographs.

Basically, I wanted to overcome the limitations of drawing myself in the mirror, for example the restricted possibilities where I could draw and in what positions. With a mirror, I always had to look into the mirror and place myself to have a good view. In the earlier exercise, I felt I constantly got in my own way. I found most positions quite uncomfortable and this negatively affected my concentration.

Selecting the arrangement

I began on an evening with taking some photos in my study, using the 10-second self-shot feature of my camera. The initial idea was making a picture of myself while sitting at the drawing desk and working at the computer, which is a very typical pose for me. But arranging a nice photo in the tiny studio didn’t work out. I then made several pictures of me with my cat Gina on the sofa. I tried strong directional light, but none of the photos really pleased me nor seemed to work. The angle at which the picture was taken seemed to compresse the figure in the middle, in a similar way as some of my sitting figure drawings were distorted.

The next day, I re-approached the task. I wanted to find a meaningful motif which was worth the effort of making a larger drawing. This may actually be a shortcoming of many of my earlier drawings – they lack personal importance because I focused on task instructions, not on meaning. Of course I put much effort in finding suitable arrangements for each task, but this was rather a technical approach. Going outside this morning I thought I might draw myself taking the morning coffee on the terrace, which has become a pleasant habit. It’s already October but when the sun shines, the temperatures are mild enough to sit outside. So this was the second setting I explored and it seemed to work out.

I tried various positions, like different angles of the chair, different angles of myself on the chair, and different seating and looking positions. I experimented with zooming in and out to see how much space I wanted to give the figure, compared to the background. Every 4 or 5 pictures, I transferred them to the computer to compare and analyse what was ok and how I might improve the composition. The main problem was that I looked as if I was sitting uncomfortable, which was not the main message I wanted to convey. But it was difficult to arrange the small camera on the table and trigger the autoshot, with only 10 seconds to quickly walk over to the chair and place myself and relax to sit as comfortable as I normally would.

I also managed to throw down my coffee mug and pour some warm coffee over my leg, which caused brief irritation, some cleaning and changing clothes, before I continued without coffee mug.

When I had around 20 pictures, I felt that there were some I might use and wanted to select among these. I looked through all of them several times, then made a selection of 5 or 6 which all had something I liked, and then finally chose the one which I thought would work best for my drawing.

I found it showed enough of the figure and the placement of my arms and legs was characteristic for how I usually sit, and looked like not too much clutter. I also liked that my cat Gina was sitting behind my head, and the combination of myself looking to the side and Gina looking into the camera. It was also nice to have some blue sky in the background and the apartment buildings to give an idea of the entire setting. I preferred this to closer-up views with more zoom, where the figure was larger but looked a bit encaged and decontextualized.

Once the decision for this picture was made, I did some follow up work on the computer to produce an outprint which I could use as the basis for my drawing.

Developing the picture: Selecting a section and making the printout

First step was to define the section that I wanted to include in my drawing. I thought about just selecting “on the fly”, possibly differently for each study and thus working my way to the section that worked best. But then I preferred to cut out the outer areas which I found less interesting. I thought that this initial decision would improve the focus of the subsequent studies and the final drawing, and I could enlarge the section and thus it would be easier to work with details, if necessary. I made the section as a rectangle of 1:1.4, which corresponds to the DIN format, because I wanted to use an A2 format for the final drawing. I was aware that restricting myself to a selection and use a defined format for it might reduce my flexibility to modify the initial idea as the studies would develop. On the other hand, I felt quite sure about my decisions and thought I might give it a try and if it didn’t work, I could always go back to the original picture.

Image 1: Original picture

Image 2: My chosen section of the original image

P1060147For-print

The first printouts were of the original image and the section I had chosen. These were with default printer settings. My aim was to produce an outprint to use as the basis for my studies and the final drawing, because I did not want to have the computer screen in front of me while drawing. It may be practical and generally I prefer a paperless office, but for my artwork I try to reduce my every day reliance on the computer. Which of course doesn’t really work… where would I be with this task if I couldn’t use the computer to solve the problem of drawing myself?

The printouts had modified the colour impression and I did not like that. The sky was too intensely coloured and had a green tone, compared to the image on screen which I perceived as correct. Most tones were also too dark, which made it difficult to distinguish important elements, for example the coffee mug before my black t-tshirt, or one leg before the other.

I then tried out several variations in printer settings and the paper, and also the output size. In total, I produced 10 printouts, from which I could use one in A4 and maybe a second enlarged to A3.

Conclusions

For my purposes, I need to adapt the image and printout settings. This printout needed increased brightness, and I had to switch off any colour matching between computer and printer. Enlarging to A3 would have been desirable but the printouts didn’t work for me because of the colour mismatch at the cutting lines. My printout number 7 on white heavy paper was supposed to be the basis for the next steps in this assignment: Making preliminary studies

I’m documenting this process to make visible the amount of work behind something as simple as “using a photograph as source for a drawing”.

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Check and log: Self portrait

Which drawing materials produced the best results? Why?

For me, the 4B pencil and the coloured pencils worked best. I think this was because of their capacity to create subtle tonal nuances which seems to be important when drawing faces.

 

Does your self portrait look like you? Show it to a couple of frinds or family members and note down their comments.

Yes, I think my self portraits look like me, in particular the second one.

 

Did you find it easy to convert your sketches into a portrait?

No, the sketches are something different. But they help to focus on a particular detail and then in the final sketch the task as a whole becomes less complex.

 

Were our preliminary drawings adequate?

No, I don’t think so. The head and neck preliminary drawings were close to ridiculous. The sketches of the portrait from memory as well. I’m under the impression that if I’m told to make a quick preliminary drawing I can’t get into the task. I seem to need the feeling that I’m doing something real, not preliminary.

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